4/11

I feel like I was beyond prepared. My professor gave us more than enough time and preparation to present. We had time to create the project and a practice presentation in class. It turned out great for me. I liked the CSW because I started off with just one person asking me 100 questions and…

04/04/17

I prefer to write a research paper rather than some digital or kind of creative thing. I’m not creative at all and I hate art. Writing isn’t that hard plus you can get people to edit it and give suggestions, unlike doing a project because when you’re done with you’re project nobody is going to…

3/21/17

Football safety, more focused on the brain without making the sport soft, using suggestions and facts to prove that it can be done.

03/14/17

One thing I found to be interested that I definitely never knew was that the Super Bowl has decreased in views over the past 7 years and the number of little league soccer players around the United States has increased over the last 6 years. I wonder if the number of soccer players have increased…

3/7/17

I will just revise all of the parts that needed to be changed. The paper sucks, its also annoying, and frustrating. My plan is to schedule a meeting most likely on Thursday to get more revision on the last 5 pages that didn’t get revised and all the revision that needs to be done on…

02/28/2017

My argument is new technology and rules for the game of football can make it a safer sport without making it a soft sport. It compares to my thesis because my thesis is more so about brain injuries and concussions in football being reduced by safety changes. In my paper I brought up several points about…

02/16/2017

How do you feel about the safety of football? Why? With concussions being football’s top injury, what do you think should be done about the manufacturing of helmets? Why? If you know about CTE how do you feel about it and what do you think should be done about it? Why? If the sport of football made rule…

2/14/17

I am going to do an interview, maybe even two of them but one for sure on a player who actually played football here at Eastern Michigan and see his perspective on y topic. I feel like this is best for my topic because only a football player would understand the hits we take, and the sacrificing…

02/09/17

New technology and rules for the game of football is a huge topic due to many, many injuries and diagnoses later leading to death. This came to my attention and made me choose this as a topic to do research on because a few years ago my favorite linebacker Junior Seau died of a brain…

2/7/17

The challenges for me is that I haven’t been able to find enough journals on one website. I’ve gone to several different websites and most aren’t scholarly or not what I am looking for. Mine has to do with rules and technology to make football a safer sport, which I didn’t expect to be hard…

2/2/17

My strategy was just thinking deeper and being descriptive and adding details. I started right after the 3 topics 5 questions assignment. At that point I knew what I wanted to write about and what my thesis would be. So I kept the same topic from the very beginning but I also thought about changing…

1/26/17

Personally it’s fine to me. I always prefer the teacher to edit mine because I don’t trust everyone, mainly because they rather not hurt my feelings by saying, “this sucks,” or “this is horrible,” I rather them keep it real. I’ve never had a problem with it though, I just know my paper would be…